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  2021年7月24雅思大作文題目

  Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Others believe we are more and more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  范文及解析

  Introduction

  With the easier access to the Internet, people who claim that they can well perform their assignments, whether in work or in life, without the help of others only to find they may leave all the things in a mess. From my perspective, while we achieve independence in some ways, we are actually becoming more dependent on each other in others.

  【解析】

  社會類的老話題，在13年、16年分別出現(xiàn)過，這次又重現(xiàn)。出現(xiàn)了討論關(guān)鍵詞“dependent VS independent”是抽象名詞，略微有點難度。雙邊觀點互斥，可以站邊討論。

  only to find 結(jié)果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)(表達出人意料或不愉快的意思)

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  Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate the argument that citizens nowadays are becoming self-reliant. This is mainly because they seem to enjoy more freedom and fewer shackles, especially in finances. For instance, in the past, young school-leavers tended to secure a stable job and thus lean on the company to make ends meet; wives, “the angel in the house”, used to be fully engaged in domestic trivialities, being parasitic on their husbands financially; and the old always asked the young to take care of them. Things have changed. Graduates are allowed to start their own business from scratch based on the vigorous e-commerce; more women become breadwinners, leaving their husbands for babysitting; and the old, instead, freely choose to spend their late years in nursing homes. In this case, they are less dependent as they used to be.

  【解析】

  讓步：財務(wù)經(jīng)濟角度出發(fā)，從三個維度進行今昔對比，舉例論證現(xiàn)在的人，在經(jīng)濟上更為獨立。

  secure vt. 獲得

  lean on v. 依靠

  make ends meet 收支平衡;量入為出

  the angel in the house 文學(xué)意向，指代照顧家庭的賢妻良母

  domestic trivialities n. 家庭瑣事

  be parasitic on 寄生于

  from scratch 白手起家

  breadwinner n. 掙錢養(yǎng)家的人

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  However, the above argument is rather an incomplete part of the whole picture, which indicates that cooperation is the necessity in both people’s work and their daily life. More accurately, since the division of labour has become more intensified, it is a commonplace that one may be a big fish in one domain but a small potato in another. In workplace, employees are more likely to work as a team, with everyone concentrating on his or her own module. In daily life, citizens, be they working professionals or entrepreneurs, husbands or wives, the old or the young, have to rely on others to address some trivial things, from delivering food to fixing the plumbs. In this sense, everyone leans on others, with no one being an exception.

  【解析】

  從生活和工作兩方面進行闡述: 勞動分工更加細化，導(dǎo)致人們在自己擅長的領(lǐng)域之外，不得不依賴其他職業(yè)的人。

  big fish n. 大人物

  small potato n. 無名小卒

  Conclusion

  To recapitulate, while people seem to be financially independent to some extent, collaboration with others, both in employment and daily life, is inevitable.

  【解析】

  重申觀點

  recapitulate v. 總結(jié)

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