新航道

  雅思寫作是中國(guó)考生們的一大頭疼科目，也是難以提高的科目。新航道章躍老師分享小作文的流程圖 2：又一制作工序，希望能對(duì)即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!

  * 非數(shù)據(jù)圖：【流程圖】

  * 類型一：【制作工序】

  The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar fromsugar cane.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

  # Introduction

  Shown in the diagram is the procedure of making sugar from sugar cane. The process, seen in an overall view, is quite complex, consisting of multiple steps in which different machines are used.

  * 第一句話中下劃線的部分是倒裝現(xiàn)象，此時(shí)尤其注意動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)由動(dòng)詞后的名詞成分(才是真的主語(yǔ))的單復(fù)數(shù)決定。

  * 第二句中，動(dòng)詞的分詞(句中為被動(dòng))作插入狀語(yǔ)(表示主句陳述的事情以什么樣的方式、條件、原因發(fā)生。這一句中，表方式。)第二句，陳述圖的宏觀情況，拿到內(nèi)容分的同時(shí)拿到語(yǔ)法分(插入狀語(yǔ)、伴隨狀語(yǔ)以及其中的定語(yǔ)從句)

  # Body

  First, it takes a minimum of 12 months and a maximum of 18 for sugar canes to ripen, and grown canes are harvested by eitherlaborersormachinery. The next step is crushing sugar canes into juice by the crushing machine, and then the juice is purified through the limestone filter. 至此，句子的主句已經(jīng)多樣了。后面還可以更多樣： An evaporator is used at the following step, at which the purified juice becomes syrup as it is heated in the evaporator. 用器械/器皿等作為主語(yǔ)是不容易想到的，這個(gè)句子的可學(xué)性很高。Then, the syrup goes into the centrifuge, which separates sugar crystals from the syrup. 這一句和之前的一句用到了不一樣的定語(yǔ)從句，也是豐富了作文中的語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象，得語(yǔ)法分，請(qǐng)留意。Sugar crystals – the semi-product – need to dry and cool in a bucket and become the end product – sugar. 這一句中注意，dry和cool用的是不及物動(dòng)詞含義。

  * 老章自然是要提醒注意高亮標(biāo)出的詞匯。

  * 老章的這一段中的語(yǔ)法其實(shí)都是簡(jiǎn)單語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象，但是句子讀起來(lái)節(jié)奏是豐富的，主要得益于句子主語(yǔ)/開頭的多樣和豐富。

  # Conclusion

  In light of those steps, making sugar from sugar cane is a job of complexity, not only because of the many steps but also because of the need to use different pieces of equipment in each step. 這樣的結(jié)尾段內(nèi)容有一定的難度，但是可以學(xué)會(huì)。首先重申一下圖的全貌，然后就這個(gè)圖而言，可以解釋一下是因?yàn)椴襟E多，并且每個(gè)步驟都有不一樣的器械。這個(gè)套路是可以學(xué)會(huì)的，要學(xué)。