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  劍8Test2雅思寫作Task1范文+解析

  題目分析,包括回答中需要涉及的要點、對比以及考生可能對題目產生的錯 誤理解。

  要點

  1. 其中兩個代表薪資水平,兩個代表基礎設施配備,第五個代表保險(財務方面)。

  2. 不同的方面代表不同的趨向。

  3. 文章應該提及所有出現(xiàn)的數(shù)字。(包含 15 組數(shù)字)

  名師點題劍橋雅思8作文

  考生可能產生的錯誤理解和問題

  1. 應使用過去完成時。

  2. 數(shù)字用百分比表達,不必寫出總額數(shù)。

  建議的寫作結構,對比此結構與考生有可能采用的不恰當結構。

  介紹部分應該把題目用自己的話重寫一遍。正文主體部分可以有三種寫作樣式。可以將正 文劃分為 5 段(每段描述一個條目),或者分為 3 段(每段按照薪資水平,基礎設施配備和 保險來描述一個餅形圖)。對大部分考生而言,每段描述一個餅形圖的寫作樣式或許會比較 容易,但是如果選擇此種樣式,切忌數(shù)字重復出現(xiàn)。最后應該有一個簡短的評論,要特別 突出 1-2 個關鍵點。

  參考范文

    ?The pie charts show how a school spent money, in percentage terms, in the years 1981, 1991and 2001, across five categories.

  The majority of spending in each year was on salaries. Teachers’ salaries accounted for 40% of spending in 1981. This increased to 50% in 1991, but dropped to 45% in 2001. Salaries for other workers accounted for 28% of spending in 1981, 22% in 1991 and 15% in 2001, demonstrating a constant fall.

  Spending on resources such as books and on furniture and equipment took up 30% of

  spending in 1981 – 15% each. By 1991, spending on resources had risen to 20% whilst spending on furniture and equipment had fallen dramatically to only 5%. By 2001, spending on resources had more than halved (in percentage terms) to 9% whereas spending on furniture and equipment had risen relatively substantially to 23%.

  Finally, spending on insurance rose from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991 and thereafter to a more significant 9% of the total in 2001.

  In summary, relative spending in all five categories changed a lot, with spending on teachers’ salaries being the largest portion.

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